Thread:Patrickau 26/@comment-71.59.226.27-20130613051347/@comment-1852035-20130613054436

I read you work, and it's quite good that you added the DS version plot. However, I see that some of the information that you put was already mentioned and you kinda making it more redundant. Most all of it was mention in the Playable characters and Abilities. I also notice that you spell Dimension wrong and you didn't quite polish you works here.

So, I deleted some repeated information and now I'm gonna adjust it more since it notice that some information that you add weren't clean up yet.